Your topic and ideas were interesting. I think you could maybe incorporate Kantian ethics into your paper to make your argument stronger. I also think there may be a lack of clarity in some of your arguments.

I'm very interested in your thoughts on lulu. I also have certain thoughts and concerns about corporate ethics. If you want to focus on this brand's promotion of leggings and tights to cause body anxiety or a yoga craze among women, you can also pay attention to how its brand product promotion for men differs from that for women. At the same time, I also think you can focus on discussing whether the motivation for brand promotion of products is just to create a gimmick for product sales rather than respecting consumers ethically.

I really like the framework/idea you came up with to address the often-neglected issue, but it's gonna be a lot better if you had time to talk about it more

I like the part where you raise a specific case about Lululemon. The ideas and thoughts are great, but the connection is not that clear. It would be better if you could provide further explanations on how the advertisement is related to ethical questions.