I thought your topic was extremely interesting. However, I think it could be framed more clearly because it seems that it shifts between evaluating merit based on potential, outcome, or background. I think it would be stronger if you focus on one of those points, narrowing the scope of your paper to make it stronger.
I thought your topic was extremely interesting. However, I think it could be framed more clearly because it seems that it shifts between evaluating merit based on potential, outcome, or background. I think it would be stronger if you focus on one of those points, narrowing the scope of your paper to make it stronger.